SWEET!

This was really fun. And well organized. Actually had a very sad emotional vibe going on about it. you have a sweet voice and the mandolin at 231 is wicked.
CheeRs maTe

This is by far my favorite song by you ever, daniel.
Though I cry out for some rhythmic variation in the solo-ish mandolin bridge.
One of my favorite sample-outros, too Cool

Lovely piece. Nicely realized and charming, too.

You painted a vivid colours picture with this song.
I can't understand the words and posting the lyrics helps a lot Embarrassed
I like the dramatic mood and sad atmosphere.
Technically speaking this is a very good work. Each instrument comes out of the mix really well.
Well done
Cheers

Composez, jouez, mais s'il vous plait, ne chantez pas ! Même avec des paroles moins cul-cul ! Ah, cest pour les pitites nenfants ? Ah bon....

Très jolie
Just an advice, copy the hard left panned vocals allso to the right with a very small delay. It will fill up the song.

Once again we have a very different style.
Interesting use of the accordian. Is it real one or synth?
I like the mix of instruments overall, as well as the vocals.

Daniel, Super song!
I can’t understand the words but the picture you’ve painted is fantastic.
Great production. The blend was perfect!
Those were the best accordion SF2’s I’ve ever heard.

Very nice atmospheric piece. Accordion is well done. Good work.

thought so to. The Accordian caught my attention immediately - I use to play in the school accordian band!

A nice improvement
well done
Cheers

A very nice song Daniel. The accordian sounds great - very authentic. The vocals are good (even though I don't understand the words) and the whole thing is very atmospheric. Great production too - every instrument sounds clear.

I am lucky, I can understand the words and I can tell you that they are as beautiful as the music!!
Superb, I enjoyed it so much. Thanks for this pure moment of poetry.
I can listen to it in loop for long... I'm a Daniel Big Fan. Kiss
bye

C'est pas dangereux de frôler le clapot ? ça fait un peu Angelo Branduardi, non ?

J'aime bien la chanson. L'arrangement des cordes pourrait être plus "fignolé". C'est toujours mieux de bien conduire les voix, qu'elles soient chacune très cohérentes sur le plan mélodique.
Sinon, ya plein d'idées et c'est joli.

Moi je pense qu'il faudrait supprimer les voix, et peut-être quatre ou cinq des instruments, pour alléger l'ensemble

Je ne suis pas d'accord: le texte est joli, et Daniel est chanteur...

Pfff... à vous décourager de donner des conseils....

I didn't understand all the vocals, but I think the music made up for it with that moody melody. Nice recording too.